Thursday, 28 July 2016

show not tell

BOOM ”I’m going to die!” I cry in horror. Flames were rising and getting hotter and hotter by the very long lasting second. Glass shattered all around me. Dirt spat into my eye blinding me for a horrible minute.The fire was screaming now. I tremble in pain as I scrape some glass out of my  leg, as blood poured out.I was becoming deafened  by the loud noises and people yelling and screaming.

by Sophie

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